“I wish your Merry Christmas, I wish…” Suddenly, I tumbled down the stairs but I didn’t mind. I was too happy.
“Merry Christmas, sweetie.” My mom gave me a hug.
“You too.” Our family had quick breakfast and seated near the Christmas tree. There was lots of presents with a Christmas card. As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face. Then I started to opening my presents.
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