Tuesday, 28 August 2018
T3 W6
There was a boy named jack he had a hard time at school and was bullied by other kids. He had never had any friends but that all changed today. Jack was biking to school in his knew pink suspenders. He was very nervous and worried that he was going to get bullied. Two other boys passed “what's up nerd,” one of the boys said. They stopped and pushed him off the bike and they threw his bag into the river and biked away. Another kid from school biked past and said are you alright.Jack said “they were bullying me” so they walked to school. On the way jack said do you want to be freinds? sure he said.
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