We were walking down the street, the nerves were rushing through my system. It was Gemma's and I first time selling Girl Scout cookies. We started
contemplating on what house to go to. We decided on the pink house, right beside a river. We walked up the stairs to their house and knocked on the
door waiting for someone to come, there was no response. Just as we were about to leave the door opened.
contemplating on what house to go to. We decided on the pink house, right beside a river. We walked up the stairs to their house and knocked on the
door waiting for someone to come, there was no response. Just as we were about to leave the door opened.
“Hi!” I said. “Would you like some cookies we cooked?” I asked.
“I would love some!” she exclaimed.
“Yay!” Now why was I nervous again?
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