It had been raining all morning.I am salty because we were gonna go to the beach for the whole day and have a beach day. I said what are we going to do instead and my parents said how about we go to the indoor pools. Then I said sure. We got there and they said sorry there are closed cause the rain made us have a power cut and the pools are freezing. Sorry about that well have a good day. We got back home and we were all so sad. Then the rain never stopped.
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