Wednesday, 29 August 2018
"The" Lighthouse
The waves are as ginormous as mountains, whitewater gushing around the black concrete lighthouse. Dark puffy clouds swarming above, darkness rolls around the lighthouse. Windows as tiny as mice. The tower creaking as the waves roll over, testing the stability of the structure. Splitting concrete. Slowly crushing the black tower.
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