(30/08/2018.)
The somber, grey bricks grandly complemented the whirlwind ocean. They crashed and broke like grass around the momentous structure, that seemed sturdy and suttle from the blind eye.
Breathtakingly the bleached blue monstrosities of water fell like ivy around the looming tower, which matched whole to the fellow sky. Grey, black and navy clouds surrounded the chaos as if a bystander of a crime. Ungracefully, the ocean portrayed the idea it was alive and breathing, creating and displaying horrid emotion by spitting and spluttering. No ongoing hope was shown for the lights had blown, bleak and unhopeful guiding no way for sole travelers.
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