Wednesday, 29 August 2018
Descriptive writing Maia
The angry, swirling sea spiraled up around me. Waves clash against the solid brick wall, sounding like a bell ringing inside my head. Looking out of my window all I can see is dark stormy clouds heading towards me. It gives the lighthouse an ominous feeling. Shivers run down my spine like spiders squirming. I can feel my heart pounding as another surge of waves heads to the isolated lighthouse. I peer outside and see the waves chopping and churning, making my stomach feel nauseated. Suddenly BANG. The wave hitting the lighthouse jolts everything. Then silence...
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