Monday, 13 August 2018

W4 T3

Me and my friends were walking on the road when suddenly a car drove in and the driver just jumped out and said "can you keep my car safe while I'm gone? I said sure. He gave me his keys and ran off. My friends said we should take it for a drive, Now why would I do that? Still, my friends insisted so we took it for a drive it was fun until the cops started chasing us, I drove as fast as I could but we couldn't shake them. We managed to get away I never stole another thing again.
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  1. Anonymous15 August 2018 at 21:14

    nice work arjan like it use more and better language

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