Monday, 13 August 2018

W4 T3

Ding dong, the doorbell went. I rushed downstairs to see who it was, I opened the door when a crowd of people started yelling and taking photos of me. Just then a reporter pushed through the crowd to ask for an interview, "and why would I do that" I replied, I was so confused. I slammed the door and ran back inside and turned the tv on to get everything all out of my head. I turned the news on and it had a picture if me on it, what, when, how I thought to myself. This couldn't be me, is it?

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