I was on the rim of death because of a stupid radar failure. A category 5 storm danced its was over to my lighthouse without the radar picking it up. Now I had nowhere to go my larger than life dinghy was sucked away like a pea and the killer giant waves were still rolling in. I heard the old beauty that I had been working in for over 20 years start to crack than one fierce wave finished her and I.
Wednesday, 29 August 2018
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I was on the rim of death because of a stupid radar failure. A category 5 storm danced its was over to my lighthouse without the radar picking it up. Now I had nowhere to go my larger than life dinghy was sucked away like a pea and the killer giant waves were still rolling in. I heard the old beauty that I had been working in for over 20 years start to crack than one fierce wave finished her and I.
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