Wednesday, 29 August 2018
Description writing
The waves crashed violently against the rough brick wall. The clouds curiously hovering as far as can be seen. Thunder threatening the stability of the abandoned lighthouse. The wind just adding to the strength of the wave. Suddenly the lighthouse gives up. It falls into the welcoming deep dark sea. Nothing to be seen. Nothing to be heard. Nothing to be found.
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