He stood up to the stand.
My breath hitched, as he waited to receive my verdict. I could almost hear his ecstatic heartbeat, I stood, walking towards him. His eyes dangerously darkened. I struggled to speak.
"Do you realize the effect of manslaughter?" He'd let out a sickening laugh, refusing to answer, my blood began to boil.
"Why did you do it? How could you be brought to end someone's life! It's Sick. Explain." I shot, the courtroom murmured, He froze, Then smirked.
I gulped.
"Well then, you seem to know everything." He Seethed. "Why would I do that?"
Sunday, 12 August 2018
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