Sunday, 12 August 2018

100WC T3 W4

Why would I do that I said in a powerful voice, why would I sell my farm just so you can build some houses on it. You might have persuaded some other bloke but your not persuading this one. they city has come close enough to this area and I don't want it to overrun it. As the agent drove away down the rugged driveway I thought of what my father had said. He said if anyone tried to buy this farm dont sell it to them I worked hard for this and I don't want you to throw it away 

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