Thursday, 23 August 2018

Josef 100wc T3 W5

I couldn't believe it I had won the international no entries online lottery. I had given all my bank account info and paid the small fee of two hundred thousand dollars, then all I had to do was wait. I waited for weeks, months; until one day I received a letter in the mail saying “your a wiener.” I excitedly opened the letter ignoring the misspelling of winner .As I read the contents of the letter I was aware of the smile on my face. But when the sixtieth grammatical mistake was made I realized that it was a scam.

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