"want to earn some cash"this guy asked me
"how much and what job?" I answered
"get away driver ...
"why would I do that"I said he raises one eyebrow
"I'm in" I said. Next thing I know I'm in the car they just left. 10 minutes past there in the car. Put my foot on the accelerator I get up to 200 kpr. Two cops come up beside me and try to cut me off . I put my foot on the brake the two cops go fly in front of me. My tyre popped and I spin out.
Monday, 13 August 2018
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I like the idea of the story, I would ask you to go over the punctuation and some capital letters because I've noticed there are a few not in place.
ReplyDeleteGripping story lucas that could have turned into a great story. Next time you could try to use more descriptive language.
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