Tuesday, 14 August 2018

T3W4

I looked down at the spring valley and thinking why would I do that. I'm awoken to mum and a tower of pancakes, She informs me the we are going to a adrenaline place with high ropes,bungy jumping and skydiving, I think I'm scared. We start the long drive and on arrive I nearly scream at the site of all the monstrosities. The guide straps my harness in and says "Its not as bad as you think". Yeah right! He grabs me and take me to the bungy jump, hooks me in and gives me a countdown. 3,2,1 WewE I go flying down to the ground and instantly fly up again. What a day a town of pancakes then bungy jump what fun 
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  1. Anonymous28 August 2018 at 21:29

    I really liked this piece of writing
    just remember after your commas you need a space and make sure it makes sense
    otherwise it was really good

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